Kia Ora
This week in Lockdown our school told us to write a persuasive writing if the teachers should allow junk food or not.
here is my writing if our school should allow junk food or not
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Kia Ora
This week in Lockdown our school told us to write a persuasive writing if the teachers should allow junk food or not.
here is my writing if our school should allow junk food or not
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Louka
ReplyDeleteGreat job for putting your writing on your blog. However, it is very hard to read in this format. Could you post it another way so we can read it easily? If you copy something from a Doc, remember to press shift when you paste it.
Kia Ora Louka, I agree with Mrs Carney, your writing is great but we are unable to read it easily.
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